Wednesday, March 11, 2009

My Fairy Tale

Once upon a time there was a beautiful princess stuck in a castle with three wolfs garding the door. She was trying to jump out the window. She was trying to run but nobobby herd her skerim. And a handsome prince cach her and then they lived happily ever after.

By Lakeisha

2 comments:

Room 306 said...

Lakeisha,

I liked reading your fairy tale! You put many elements of a fairy tale in your story! For example, you used the special number 3 (for the 3 wolves) and your characters were royalty. I also liked how you used describing words to give me information about your characters. Great writing!

Love,
Ms. Edwards

Paige said...

Hey Lakeisha,

I really enjoyed your poem! It was very interesting and had a good ending. Good job!

Paige Huffstetler
ASU Teaching Fellow